Kingdom Shaychu: The Story (1st person point of view)

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Post by DarkHeart on Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:38 pm

good job ace... cool story.... .... .... oh, c'mon! when do i come in?! xD

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Re: Kingdom Shaychu: The Story (1st person point of view)

Post by Ace on Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:48 pm

(Lol I haven't come up with a future for this story and ppl still reply after like a couple weeks, Damn I have Fans)

Chapter 8: (Give me an idea for Inspiration)

"Sir, the princess of the fallen kingdom is here. She is possibly the only Survivor of the terrible war, and her father King Philip was murdered. Her life must've been turn completely upside down" a guard said to King Jack.
"Send her in" Jack said with Espeon, Aj, and Justin standing by his side. "Hello Alex, I've received you letter probably a month ago" Espeon said "I've kept it inside the library to refer to". Alex was quiet at first and spoke "Before my father died he talked to a man who's name I do not know, but he did carry a Boomerang so I'm suspicious that he may have killed my father" She finished.

(Omg special super awesome plot twist, could there be two betrayers in the kingdom?)

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^Remembered DarkHeart's awesome art thread and found Eevee pic again, Thanks many and a lot mores.


I'll edit it to later to fit me, also might update this

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